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group name: monicasfiction
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August 09, 2007 10:20 PM EDT --
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The night of the prom I was practically giddy as I readied for the evening. Momma and Daddy were excited too. The Burkefield's were a well . . . more
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August 14, 2007 03:05 PM EDT --
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I was done being the good southern wife. I would put on a show until tomorrow morning . . . more
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August 09, 2007 09:03 PM EDT --
The beeping of the alarm awoke me. I scrambled to end the wretched sound. Six A.M. already? It seemed I had just fallen asleep. I sat up and put my feet in my old worn slippers, . . . more
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August 10, 2007 10:54 AM EDT --
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I came out of my daydreams long enough to realize it was almost three o'clock. It was about time for Betsy to stop by with the mail. I was the last . . . more
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March 28, 2006 07:18 PM EST --
The beeping of the alarm awoke me. I scrambled to end the wretched sound. Six A.M. already? It seemed I had just fallen asleep. I sat up and put my feet in my old worn slippers, . . . more
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March 30, 2006 07:10 PM EST --
The Red Suitcase, Part Two
See Part One here
I was a shy teenager. I didn't have a lot of friends. Being pulled in and out of school did not help. Rumors would go around that the . . . more
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April 01, 2006 05:47 PM EST --
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Part Three
I came out of my daydreams long enough to realize it was almost three o'clock. It was about time for Betsy to stop by with the mail. . . . more
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May 20, 2006 06:20 AM EDT --
The Professor instructed, "Eschew obfuscation."
The student replied, "Yeah, I'm upfer skatin'!"
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April 06, 2006 05:54 PM EDT --
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Betsy ran up to me and gave me a hug. "Tangie my girl, looks like ya gonna see some suitcase dreams in this lifetime after all!"
I hugged her . . . more
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August 11, 2007 07:16 AM EDT --
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Betsy ran to me and gave me a hug. "Tangie my girl, looks like ya gonna see some suitcase dreams . . . more
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May 20, 2006 05:21 AM EDT --
Here lies Jane Doe. Her note said, "Tell everyone I'm so sorry."
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May 20, 2006 05:28 AM EDT --
"Whoa, Betty! Bob changed offices today - the corner office. Use my coat."
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May 20, 2006 05:48 AM EDT --
Can someone knocked down from a pedestal ever be placed back again?
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May 25, 2006 07:43 AM EDT --
FYI:
Original - Wedding Day
First Revision - Wedding Day Revised
Critique Desired, Welcomed, Sought . . .
Today is your wedding day. You are sitting in front of your vanity brushing your long blonde . . . more
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April 19, 2006 03:14 AM EDT --
I originally entered this in the Gather Short Fiction contest. I have since done some editing to it, and decided to re-publish it here. I hope you enjoy the changes - or for those new to the . . . more
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May 20, 2006 05:08 AM EDT --
We do not need birth control. What we need is a miracle.
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May 20, 2006 05:42 AM EDT --
Love lies crush my world, spiral me down, and knock me breathless.
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May 20, 2006 05:16 AM EDT --
Wiggling stopped: pillow lifted. She kisses her. "Daddy can't hurt baby anymore."
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May 20, 2006 05:34 AM EDT --
Two teaspoons in the tea. Make Kool-Aid for the girls. Adios Hubby!
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May 20, 2006 05:38 AM EDT --
It seemed a good plan, but then again, death is really distant.
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